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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Panic

    Hi RavenBlack, Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad to know you enjoyed the poem. By using the word 'muchness', I mean that just as I am beginning ...

    Sun Mar 12, 2017 6:45 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Panic

    Hi Rachel32, Thank you so much for your review! I really like the happy muchness part and I think it goes well with the poem. I will look into the ...

    Sun Mar 12, 2017 6:41 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Panic

    hello ScytheMeister, Firstly, thank you for your detailed review. It means a lot to me Let me explain what I meant with the following lines. a strange desire to fathom. ...

    Sun Mar 12, 2017 6:34 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: It Began In the Market (Poem One)

    Hi! I really liked what you have written. Good job. I was just bit confused and had to read it several times. I suggest you should try and make it ...

    Sat Mar 11, 2017 12:07 pm


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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