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Well, this had a good intention, I'm sure. However, the song was sort of lacking in emotion. That is just how I, as a reader, felt, and to you, this ...

Alright, well, this is a very bitter song. It's verging on cranky-old-man bitter at certain points. The intention/viewpoint in this piece is rather scattered and unclear. It seems to switch ...

Alright, so, this was alright. (

Okay, so, this was a good poem. Good. If good is what you're aiming for, congratulations, but I think you're trying to go beyond. The gradual decrease in both strength ...

Alright, so I think it's been said that it is a bit difficult to read quite enough times. I, however, had no problems with reading through this and understanding it ...

because we were non identical twins. Non-identical twins are called fraternal. I would know. I am one. :wink: So, yes, sorry, I'm a bit short on time at the moment, ...

This was good. It was very simple, however. I can understand why you may not want to expand on this much more. I can say I'm like that with some ...

This is a very strong, meanful poem. Loads of emotion and all that jazz. Sorry, I sound pretty shallow right now. :P Anyhow, this was very touching and conveyed your ...

I really like this piece. It really struck a chord with me. I've recently gotten into cutting and my left arm in particular is really scarred and obviously the result ...

Aheh. Wow. I feel really stupid right now. I don't know what this is a parody of. Well, I get it's a Poe thinger, but I don't recognize anything. I'm ...

Haha. I love this. It has its rough spots, as previously pointed out. The rhyming does come off as forced at several different points. Listen to the people above me ...

See, here's the deal, I read this, right? And then I went through and sort of skimmed over all the other reviews. I hit the one reply button or whatever ...

two words give up go out never again in waves it's meaningless in pain it's worthless never again in dread leaving you no reason the same to live Well, before ...

*ahem* Capitalization, please? ^^They said don't change it...I don't know if you meant it as a style or just not bothering. If it was a style, go ahead and keep ...

This is pretty good. I never try at all on school papers, so this is great compared to what I do. I'd say maybe add a section or two of ...