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Re: Twisted
I can completely relate to this, i am always shoved towards religion but i doi love the flowyness of the poem, could use a little minor punctuations and details but ...
Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:56 pm -
Re: and the lone girl in rome
i love the flowyness of the poem, could use a little minor punctuations and details but great all together love the shortness of it, keep on writting because yoour great ...
Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:53 pm -
Re: either way
i love the flowyness of the poem, could use a little minor punctuations and details but great all together love the shortness of it, keep on writting because yoour great ...
Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:52 pm -
Re: Arms Around Me
i really admired you piece it was great, i felt as though the water was flowing beneath my feet. awesome imagery, and your words are well breath taking also the ...
Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:44 pm -
Re: What is time?
okay so this is so rich and great love where your going with the poem, and i doesnt go off topoic i maybe would have spaced it out a little ...
Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:39 pm