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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Too Much

    This is a really good start on poetry (better than any sonnet I tried to write when I was in high school). And I know exactly how they teach poetry ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: New Haven: Chapter 1: The Train of Memories [Not Updated]

    Hello! You're off to a really good start! As others have mentioned, there are a lot of instances of telling rather than showing. Along those lines, I would like to ...

    Nov 20, 2015


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners