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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Healing

    "this is my will so mote it be" - doesn't mote mean a floating speck of dust? I didn't really get this line :) Otherwise it's meant to be a ...

    Jul 22, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Mr Pailey and his Adventures Through Time

    "Mr Pailey looked upon his surroundings in a very curious manner" - this means the way he looked around was curious, not that he looked around curiously. I would revise ...

    Jul 22, 2007


I am big enough to admit I am often inspired by myself.
— Leslie Knope