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I like the way it the poem starts a little bit serious then surprises the reader with a funny line. I am a little bit confused of where the pattern ...

This story was really funny and made me laugh. I suggest describing what the characters look like in future stories so that the reader can truly imagine their reactions or ...

I like the way you compared your kind of love to a speeding car that ended up as a tragic accident, well maybe not an accident. This touches me because ...

I liked the third stanza because the simile about being powerless like a flea sounds very creative. I don't usually see these kind of comparisons in many same-old, same-old poetry. ...