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Yes, it's not only give us space for unleashing creativity, but to maximize on what Haiku doesn't give. Partly, I love Haiku form more, but Tanka is not any badder ...

Diction is our choices of words. Each person has different diction. Therefore, it's up to you for your poem is like. I was wrong, I know, I admitted it. Well, ...

Thanks for commenting. :) However, I don't sure that it needs more punctuation as I think there are a lot of them there. Yet, thanks.

You are deeply wrong. Free verse DO need to have rhythm (the meter and et cetera) because they don't rhyme. I cannot be aggravated either, so I will leave it ...

They were all my perceptions of some words. About the Marigold, I meant you could reverse it. (I'll try to explain it more clearly, although I think I've said that ...

Thanks for reviewing :D Tanka is not well-known enough as haiku. I wish for us to indulge in it. Experimenting with poetic forms is always a fun. Yet, thanks!

Hi, Thanks For Your Review. About the capitalization, it really depends on my mood. And thanks for the thought of adding comma after Rainbow. I just thought of an idea ...

Thanks for the review. Yes, I really meant it. After pondering a little while with the poem (I don't know how much I read it--hundreds?), I decide to make a ...

Hi, I'll be reviewing this...but it takes a really handful of time. Wait another three weeks or more or less and I'll be done. Hope you're still here by then. ...

Thanks~

Thanks on pointing the pausing part as good. I don't really listen to Yoga music, so I can't really know the differences. Well, again, thanks :)

That's actually intended. Never mind that, thanks for the review! I'll try to be more accurate in the flow of the poem. ~Memo

Thanks.

Thanks for the warm words on the cold day, Gravity.

Thanks, K! I appreciate this... very... I was kinda late, but thanks anyway.