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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Thought I'd try again

    i loved the ending "Or was I destined for hell?" good job! *gives a thumbs up*

    Mar 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Reflection of the Sky

    it's very nice, but the last few lines seem a little out of place as if you had an idea but lost it along the way.

    Mar 21, 2008


“Writing fiction is the act of weaving a series of lies to arrive at a greater truth.”
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