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  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: The Last Night of Summer

    thanks for correcting me!! Sorry if not everything in the review was super helpful, just some suggestions : ))

    Jul 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gaunt

    I tried making it about an unwanted requiem kinda thing, but i can see your confusion haha

    Jan 4, 2022
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gaunt

    Thank you for the review! This was really helpful. Breaking the lines up into this sort of "rhythm" was a style choice I made while creating it, and my mindset ...

    Jan 4, 2022
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gaunt

    Thank you so much for the review!! The line, "i miss your bloody nostrils and your bruised gums" is really saying a "i miss when you got hurt, but i ...

    Jan 4, 2022
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gaunt

    Thank you so much for the review!! The line, %u201Ci miss your bloody nostrils and your bruised gums%u201D is really saying a %u201Ci miss when you got hurt, but i ...

    Jan 4, 2022


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