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Thanks so much! Wow! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Oh! Thanks! It all makes sense now! Great job again!

Thanks for the review! I'll break up the first sentence, but your second and third changes don't have to be made. For the second, I was saying how he was ...

Thank you!!! Yeah, I do have a problem with commas...working on that.

Wow! Thanks so much! Glad you liked it, especially the title, because it took a while for me to think of one! I've always wanted to try archery, but I ...

Thanks so much! The descriptions and emotions were very easy for me to write since I love tennis and have played forever. I think you're right about Gatorade. I'll change ...

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it. Thanks for the suggestions. I was thinking about rewriting the first part so it flowed more and fit in better with the second ...

Thanks for the reply! By the way, the bolded comma was a mistake, and I included the coffee rule because one of my favorite teachers had that as her one ...

Thanks! Glad you liked it. I was wondering if you realized Michael was blind before he said it. I think you're right about the comma after terror. I'll fix that. ...