frenchyrude

I love your Story. it was nicely written and had a nice flow to it. Some part was a little confusing but if not it was good. I would love ...

I m a little confuse. Is this your first chapter? are you going to add more? If you were not planning to, I think that you should. Your story sound ...

It was really nice and easy to read. You can get got really fast in the story which is good. I just thought that it was a little short. But ...

i think it really good but you do need more information on her family. were is her mom? why she didn't call the police when she could? what happen with ...