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Re: Things come out right in the end
AWWWWWWWWWWW! (: This was absolutely AMAZING! I LOVED every word of it. I'm an extreme die hard romantic and this was just flawless. You had all the conversation good and ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: Trust
This was...interesting. To be honest with you I really wanted them to work things out in the end, but I suppose since he was a cheater it wouldn't work out. ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody
Ummm. It was really short. Haha I did however give a little chuckle at the end. If you could of just added on to the conversation a little I would ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: Is he Good or Evil you decide
I'm so excited that I am your first review for this! (: I absolutely believe that the villain is not evil at all! This story actually reminds me sooooooo much ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: What Is Love?
I really dont know what to say to this. This would have to be the BEST script I've ever read. I really tuned into the characters and was curious to ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Cheating Boyfriend (a really short script) [edited]
Damn, this is some script. Even though it's incredibly short I still felt the emotion you were trying to convey through. I'm really sorry if this happened to you because ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Before I Knock....
This is really amazing. It's short and sweet which is really hard to find now in days. I love how you actually never said the boy's name and just kept ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: I never told you
Let me just start off with that I'm a HUGE romantic and this was AMAZING! Especially for being your first script; it was very impressive. You could have changed some ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: fuuuck this account
I like the idea you were going with this but I found it a little hard to understand. I think if you would add a little more detail to this ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Someone Like You
My goodness where to start. This story was absolutely AMAZING! Especially for your age I was very impressed. There were some minor grammatical errors but nothing too huge(; I felt ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: I hate you...
This was really good girl! There were some grammatical errors like words instead of letters in the first sentence. And at times you spoke in present tense instead of the ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Last Kiss
This was very deep and meaningful. I'm very impressed on how you seemed to capture everything you were feelings in just some paragraphs. There are some grammatical errors that could ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: I intended to kiss you.
Girl i only have one word for you...AWWWWWWWW! That was one of the cutest short stories I've read and i was just smiling the whole time. THis is really REALLY ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Her Eyes
Hey there! This was incredibly deep and heartfelt. I felt so much after i read this that it seems almost impossible to criticize this in anyway. I loved how you ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: My love story
Hey there WinterBloom! For starters this story was good as a whole. In your third sentence you might want to find a way to re word it because the sentence ...
Nov 20, 2011
