frankmorley

This is lovely. I like the bit at the end with the werewolf. Babies

Love this. Especially the last two paragraphs, it really gives the impression of a squandered or unheard potential, and that life is waiting there to be taken by those who ...

I have added this, let me know please if I have overused the comma

I know my punctuation is awful! Thanks for the two reviews

I an confirm I did write this! ;) but thanks.. any other tips?