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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Decode

    Hey Niraco, I really liked the structure of this poem and the repetition of 'there you are' and then ending with 'we are' was very effective as this change creates ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Memorial I: You Hold Their Memories

    Hey WritingWolf (love the name), this poem clearly has had a lot of time and consideration put into every word which makes it effective and moving however I just wanted ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Spark

    hey arctic monkey, I really loved reading this poem and hope you keep writing poetry because you definitely have a spark for it! Some advide i would give would just ...

    Jun 30, 2013


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