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Re: Sacrifice
Firstly, I'd just like to say that I love this! For such a short piece of writing, you can get a good image in your head of what's going on. ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Jack
I think you've done a very good job with this piece of work. Even though it was only a short story, I felt like I was gaining some insight into ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Faith (An Except)
First of all, I really love this! I want to read more of it, it's that good. I think you've got a really good idea and you've written it in ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: A chaotic scene
First of all, I think this is a very clever piece of writing. It moves so fast that it can be hard to keep up with, but somehow you have ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Rheligion
This is such a nice story! I love the ending, I think it fits well and closes the story nicely. As Pidgeon reviewed, the only thing that could really be ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Earthquake
This is my first review, I'm sorry if it's not quite up to scratch. First of all, I really loved this. It was interesting to read and I wanted there ...
Oct 1, 2011
