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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Sacrifice

    Firstly, I'd just like to say that I love this! For such a short piece of writing, you can get a good image in your head of what's going on. ...

    Oct 12, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jack

    I think you've done a very good job with this piece of work. Even though it was only a short story, I felt like I was gaining some insight into ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Faith (An Except)

    First of all, I really love this! I want to read more of it, it's that good. I think you've got a really good idea and you've written it in ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: A chaotic scene

    First of all, I think this is a very clever piece of writing. It moves so fast that it can be hard to keep up with, but somehow you have ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rheligion

    This is such a nice story! I love the ending, I think it fits well and closes the story nicely. As Pidgeon reviewed, the only thing that could really be ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Earthquake

    This is my first review, I'm sorry if it's not quite up to scratch. First of all, I really loved this. It was interesting to read and I wanted there ...

    Oct 1, 2011


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