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Re: What if I was Blind?
*********************************************************** I really LOVE THIS but I have a couple of things to review... __________________________________________________________ 1. Put in more deta
Dec 23, 2012 -
Re: A Twisted Rose
It's great but heres the thing. ****** I noticed that you placed a period after the ". And when a person replied to something you didn't start a new paragraph ...
Nov 21, 2012 -
Re: Love Has Always Its Way
Yeah this is great but just in between each paragraph put more space so that readers won't get confused. but so far it's all great!
Nov 20, 2012