forest_ofthe_nightingale

Yeah sorry about the rushed end and all- im going to edit it as soon as i can- the "old ugly book" is a joke, by the way. :D

Whoa, I'm just curious here- are you guys (soccerfreak and Once Upon A dream) having the same thoughts? Sorry- I just had to ask. :D Anyway, to explain the third ...

OK, i like the this poem and the idea behind it, but I'm wondering, did you mean to have "pain" and "rain" rhyme in the first stanza? It takes away ...

I love the ending. Its flows really smoothly and leaves no explanation... that can be a perfect way to end.

I liked the sinister feel here. It made me want to hurt the person who was talking. That's really awesome.