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Re: The Dream Machine Chapter 1
Hello there! My name's Christina :) I think it may be a tad long, maybe in the future you could put, for example Chapter 2, Part 1? Things I liked: ...
Aug 22, 2012 -
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Hello! My name's Christina, and I really really adore this. But first, some things you could improve upon: -If you just read this over once or twice you'll see a ...
Aug 22, 2012
