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Hey pretzel, thanks for coming back! I'm really glad you liked this chapter, and sorry it took so long! :( I'll be honest: this (and the next) chapter was written ...

Always! :)

Thank you for coming back! I really appreciate your advice, and am currently revising the chapter. It was rushed, but I'm also glad I posted; a fresh set of eyes ...

Thank you so much for coming back and reviewing! I'll admit that this chapter was rushed, but your points are duly noted and I am currently in the process of ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you keep enjoying it! :) As for the nitpicks, I'm actually working on editing all of my ...

Lol thanks for the read! I'm sure you'll find something in the other chapter. :P

Thank you sooo much for your review! Lol and I get what you mean about prologues; to be honest, I skip over them too. But I was initially hesitant about ...

Thank you so much for your review, it definitely helped! I agree that this chapter was rushed, and that's something I'll fix later on. But overall I'm glad you enjoyed ...

I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah, I'll admit that the bit with Daveth not being the killer was a bit confusing for me too, and it's something I'll touch-up ...

Hehe, this is more or less the reaction I was hoping for from the readers. You'll probably hate me more (or thank me, depending) in the next few chapters! :P

Thanks for coming back! I'm so glad you're enjoying this, and depending on how things progress I might keep this in the story! For now though, it was written just ...

Thanks so much for your review! The term Badalan is actually Talon's race. It's mentioned in the prologue and throughout the rest of the story. In regards to using "said" ...

Hey no problem, happy to help! I get what you're saying about world building, and it'll get there! It's taken the better part of five years for my story and ...

No problem, always happy to help! And the best way for you to get better is to keep writing. Think of the process like baking cookies: you start off with ...

Of course! As I said earlier, your story has potential. I enjoyed reading it and am curious to see where it goes! :)