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Hey, Raina, Firefly here for a review! As I typically review while I'm reading, let's just jump right into it! :) (Blue words) represent my personal comments Green words are ...

Hey there, Seshat, Firefly in for a review! Alright, well for starters my first thought when reading your post was: "Whoa," and it wasn't a good whoa! Your chapter is ...

Hey, Vas. Firefly here for a review! I've never reviewed a script before, and wouldn't know the first thing about fixing one. But I'll go with what I can! I ...

Hey there, Mossyra. Firefly here for a review! Usually I review while reading through, so my overall impressions will be made towards the end of this post. (Blue words) represent ...

Hey Emilie, Firefly here for that review! Re-Edited with Paragraphs Paragraphs are lovely! :P Well, since I usually review while reading I'll just jump right into it! At the end, ...

Hey there, Firefly again! Alright, instead of giving comments in the beginning I'll give them at the end. Reason being that I find it much easier to review as I ...

Hey there, Berlynn. Firefly here for a review! Well, since I usually conduct my reviews while reading, I guess I'll jump right into it! Any further comments I have on ...

Hey there, Firefly again! So reviewing chapter one just wasn't enough. I thought I'd go ahead and check out chapter two, also! Well, no sense in putting off the inevitable. ...

Hey there, Kurald. Firefly here for a review! I frankly have no idea what's in my readers' mind upon reading Does anyone? Compare a novel to a painting--the artist paints ...

Hey there, Stella! Firefly here, returning the favor of a review! Mmm, a fairytale. Delicious! Though, admittedly, Rapunzel never was my favorite, I do love how you made it your ...

Hey there, Miniauthor. Firefly here for a review! First, let me start by saying that I'm not very big on posting more than one chapter (or, in your case, a ...

Hello, iceprincess. Firefly here for a review! You'll be pleased to know that I found this to be a pretty good read, and I don't give that compliment out very ...

Hey, Veiyloxx! It's Firefly again. I'm glad to see that you've added more detail to your story. It's given it more depth, showing us what's going on rather than telling. ...

Hello, bElL3! Firefly here for a review! First of all, I'd like to congratulate you on making an attempt at writing fantasy. It can be pretty difficult to effectively set ...

Hey there, Firefly here for a review! Before I begin, I must be honest with you. You more or less won't like what I'm about to tell you, but I ...