finishedmakingsense

Thanks for the reviews! Yeah, I put in the swears because it really just fits in with the character- it goes with the stream of consciousness feeling of the story. ...

Thanks everyone for the reviews. I'm not really sure what I'm going to do with this piece, I might just leave it be and carry on, or continue editing it. ...

I loved the feeling to this but some parts just didn't flow too well. If you changed around some of the lines, it would work better. I can't imagine it ...

You have a beautiful writing style. It's descriptive and poetic, it made me want to read it. Well done.