fight4whatsright

finally someone else who thinks like me! This was a wonderfully written poem with a very good train of thought. i will look out for more of your posts :)

wow. that was the best poem i've ever read - no jokes. I'm serious, you have real talent. it was full of emotion and descrpition and flowed so well. it ...

wow. i'm... speachless. I'm in awe. I'm jealous of ur serious talent. wow

thanks for your advice i will edit the poem when i have the time :D

wow the imagary was great. i felt like i was their, suffering with the people. usually when i try reveiwing work i read the first few lines then get really ...

loved it. thats all i can say. it was brilliant

and u complain about other peoples work being painful to read!!! hey kim i'm sorry but i just cant say i liked this peice. and dude why havent u called ...

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sad, believable and very well written

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