felistia

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Thank you for the review.

Hi Sagitta, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. First off I really like the thyme, I haven't seen war poems very much, so I enjoyed reading something ...

Hi, thank you for the review. I wasn't trying to make it look like society, but now that I look at it, it does look a bit like that.

Thank you for the review I will adjust it so that Zoltar thinks of Felistia and Tsunami.

Thank you for the review, I will change Tsunami's name, but I need an ice talon and a sea talon in the story for reasons I can't tell you yet. ...

Hi, sorry for being a bit late to respond. I have read a lot of books about dragons and most of them have paper scrolls. Sorry if I offend you, ...

Thank you for the review. I have fix the problems. I am still having a bit of trouble with the prologue and I am working to fix it. The story ...

Thank you for the review. I am will expand on it when I get a chance.

I would love if you could post the links to your stories. I would love to review them. I can't read anything 16 or 18 with mature content and I ...

Thank you for the review, it is very much appreciated.

I will notify you when I do.

I would love it if you could notify me when you post again.

I will try to add some more emotion into the poem. I am thinking of expanding it.

Fixed.