fearlessalways13

This is probably one of the best first chapters I've read here on YWS! Though it's a bit on the short side, it's gripping and, overall, very good. However, there ...

This is very good. I like the form of it being a letter, and the plot idea is awesome and fascinating. However, there were quite a few spelling/grammatical errors, particularly ...

Wow. I have nothing bad to say! This is, hands-down, one of the best first chapters I've seen here on YWS, and maybe even one of the best by a ...

Hi! I'm finally getting around to commenting on chapter two of this wonderful story. (: Though I liked the length of the first chapter better, this was very good. I ...

Hi there! This was an outstanding introduction to a novel I'm definitely putting on my list of must-reads. Seriously! Your character development was great, and I liked the way you ...

This is a very well-written introduction! The description was so jarring, so realistic, and I could picture everything as if it were happening in front of me. The suspenseful ending ...

Hi there! I'm fearlessalways13, and I'd just like to say a few words about your piece. Overall, I think the raw emotion you put into this was evident. To me, ...

Hey! As I said in the e-mail I sent you, I really, really liked the beginning of this story. It's abstract, not one of those, "Hey, I'm so and so, ...