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hardly, this is the only poem I have ever written that I liked, so I just made it 7 stanzas instead of 5 to go along with the religious imagery

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thanks for taking the time to leave such an in-depth review. I was going between doing parenthesis but i didn't like the look of it visually, but maybe they would ...

I thought so but I wasn%u2019t sure! Looking forward to reading it

in love with this

in love with this

Hi! Thanks for your comment, this was sort of a fleshing out process of an idea I have been thinking about for a while. There will be more soon but ...

Thanks for sharing your feedback! This is a concept I have for a logg bf er story so I was trying to flesh it out a little and see what ...

Thanks for your feedback! This is an idea I have for a larger story that wouldn%u2019t necessarily start with this snippet. I was just trying to flesh it out a ...

Thank you! This is a concept for a bigger story I%u2019ve been thinking about so I appreciate your review!

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ahhhh thank you for your review, im glad the first metaphor was clear enough I didnt know if it was too ambiguous.

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thank you for takin the time to read it

thanks so much for your review!