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Thank you for the nit-picks. Made the changes you pointed out. :)

Thank you Swiftfur! :D I'm glad you liked my work.

Thank you, Talia! That was a great review. And I'm sure you fully understand how it feels to have your work understood and appreciated. That feeling surpasses all levels. I'll ...

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This is written very well, and it also has very great meaning behind it. It was at times a little confusing though, but there is good word choice I myself ...

This is written very well, and it also has very great meaning behind it. It was at times a little confusing though, but there is good word choice I myself ...

Amazing flow throughout the chapter. I really like your writing style, it is very unique. You write like a genuine story teller, captivating yet subtle. Loved the line "Cursing under ...

Yes, that's what I was actually aiming for. But then I kept writing and turned it into an artle. Thank you for the poem idea. I'll try it! :D

Your review was extremely helpful. I'm going to fix the things you've pointed out. While I was writing this, I honestly did not realize the strength of my concluding lines. ...

Thank you! :D

Thank you so much, sunshine. I'm actually writing after a long time. And I thought anything I'd be writing now, would not be "good enough". That's how I came up ...

Hello Flame, thank you for the compliments on my writing style. You're right, I should have broken down the story a bit more. And the direct speeches should have been ...

You have gotten it right, Lucrezia! I did mean it to be a direct speech. And yes, I'll make that change. Thank you so much! :D

Hey Timmyjake. You see, I've written in the "short description" that this was originally a write-up for a freelance job, and the word limit was 600. So even if I ...

I am honoured that my review meant so much to you. And the fact that you read the book, and appreciate such details, and of course your writing style really ...

This means a great deal to me. I'm glad I got the theme of my poem across to you.