fantasy-freak

Thanks for the critisism. I tend to describe a lot, I didn't know you can over describe things. Makes you think. All I was trying to do was to get ...

Jeez people are picky!!! Here is my REVISED work: Salina stepped across the soft grass to the foster homes’ playground. Her black hair, set in pigtails down to her knees, ...

(I'm back and ready to continue from where i left off) Continuing from: Then they came upon an fork in the path one was marked and the other was unmarked. ...

COOL I HAVE REPLIES!!!!!!!!! thanks for the comments and constructive critisim. as for the spots behind your eyes thing i never even thought of it that way :wink: and if ...