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Re: The Fae (faerie) Princesses (working title)
Thanks for the critisism. I tend to describe a lot, I didn't know you can over describe things. Makes you think. All I was trying to do was to get ...
Oct 12, 2007 -
Re: The Fae (faerie) Princesses (working title)
Jeez people are picky!!! Here is my REVISED work: Salina stepped across the soft grass to the foster homes’ playground. Her black hair, set in pigtails down to her knees, ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: The Fae (faerie) Princesses (working title)
(I'm back and ready to continue from where i left off) Continuing from: Then they came upon an fork in the path one was marked and the other was unmarked. ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: I close my eyes to see...
COOL I HAVE REPLIES!!!!!!!!! thanks for the comments and constructive critisim. as for the spots behind your eyes thing i never even thought of it that way :wink: and if ...
Oct 7, 2007