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fallenbird

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night

    I really do think the best poems are written in the middle of the night or at times when you're feeling like this. And your poem has completely proved me ...

    Aug 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Instant: 4

    Hiya, This is beautifully written and I was completely drawn into it and couldn't stop reading! Your writing style is very capturing and the whole piece itself was emotional and ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: His Eyes

    Hiya! This poem beautifully portrays the scenario of a girl falling for someone who won't fully commit and won't be faithful to her. I love the way you used repitition ...

    May 12, 2015


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