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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: Oh Gray Threads!

    At first I was half asleep and thought this was an attempt at a serious poem that went horribly wrong and was about to say something scathing, then I realized ...

    Nov 22, 2004
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My smile's just a pose

    the rhyme scheme seemed a little awkward to me...like, there kept being rhymes when you didnt expect them, and then you'd expect something to rhyme and it didn't. but youre ...

    Nov 21, 2004


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman