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Re: Oh Gray Threads!
At first I was half asleep and thought this was an attempt at a serious poem that went horribly wrong and was about to say something scathing, then I realized ...
Nov 22, 2004 -
Re: My smile's just a pose
the rhyme scheme seemed a little awkward to me...like, there kept being rhymes when you didnt expect them, and then you'd expect something to rhyme and it didn't. but youre ...
Nov 21, 2004
