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^ I put up my revised version that I did today, if anyone cares to read it. Yes, the guy beat her up. It trying to suggest that Maple is ...

^ Thanks for the review. If you want me to maybe help with the climax it would be great if you'd tell me what you don't understand. Or I'll just ...

^ Thanks for the review!

Hey, foxfire here... The story overall from my perspective tells of a relationship between sisters and the events in the forest. Overall, the story has a sense of atmosphere and ...

^ Thank you for the review.

Now I think about it, I do understand where you are coming from. I'm not the brightest of all people so I don't tend to notice hints. When you do ...

@ Skins Thank you so much for the review. I do use a lot of commas, so I will go through later today and add more conjunctions to the piece ...

Cheers! I'm here as asked =) I haven't noticed any bad grammar mistakes and I had no trouble following the flow of text, that's a + for you. I'll agree ...

I think the stanzas in this piece have a lot of meaning to them, but I'd like the poem much more if the structure of each stanza varied more. It ...

Ok, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Welcome to YWS by the way, I hope you are enjoying yourself here. -Softly, he whispered an answer ...

First of all, Welcome to YWS. I'm Kit, and if you haven't already, go to the welcome mat and introduce yourself. Now, onto your story- It's interesting. I think the ...