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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: a penny for my thoughts

    This is really beautiful. Sorry I don't really have anything very helpful to say. It's really beautiful.

    May 26, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Our bridge

    Wow! I really like this poem. I would like to make a few suggestions, though. In your second line I think you could use a comma, and instead of face, ...

    May 25, 2012


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders