evieffizz

i like this its good and it expresses someones (mabye yours) feelings and its good. *sighs* but im a little disapointed to hear you've taken the words and made them ...

i think its a good poem. But Your rhythem has to inprove the rhythem of the lines are to long. i don't won't to sound mean but it's true but ...

dont  worry bout it about a city or a shooping mallin the day

this is a really good poam and it is my sort of thing and i think that you have a really good thing going. Keep up the good work. evieffizz

thanx for that your coments are really useful

i dont know about this one wat do you think i need to know asap its homework!!