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Re: My Grandpa Is Dead
I'd like to say that I hope you are doing well after your loss, and that I seen my greatest condolences. Your piece, on the other hand, is very stylized ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: Oculus
Forest of all, props to you man! This price is full of extremely well written and emotional descriptions, that is defiantly yur strong point, dang that was good! This is ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 6: The Elwright Boy
Okay, one huge looming problem I had with this work was that it went too fast, it didn't linger on scenes and at most times felt rushed. You seem to ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: Phe’s story
This story is definitely intriguing as it is interesting. It reminds me of another story I've read that had to do with experiments, The Girl With small the Gifts, I ...
Jan 17, 2017
