evanrith

I have a diffrent veiw on crits. than other people i dont touch the style or the grammar I only touch the message. Okay for one this fit close to ...

om not going to comment on grammar i never do. My what a unique take on an ordinary object. I didnt expect that to be the ending and it was ...

okay so this poem is well written with proper grammar and what not right? it is and june corrected the grammar that wasn't right. right?and I'm adverse to critizising style ...

So this style is not what i expected but i liked it very much. i completly understood what was going on as should most people who have had a tough ...

I don't really like this poem. remeber that that is also just one person's opinion. the repition in this poem is probably what threw me off along with the jagged ...

so for a first poem this is really great it shows pure undilted emotion but it lacks the eloqience of experience which isnt nessicarily a bad thing. the only though ...

This poem isnt really missing anything at all. it had a solid meaning behind it that isnt obscure or doesnt need alot of thought to nessicarily understand it. as for ...

I liked the refrences you used and the symbolism as well and its flow for me was just the right pace but i would have to hear it out loud ...

Hey anti i liked the story really well. It kept me intrested and actullyhelped out a little bit it shoved me down if you get at all what i mean ...