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Thank you so much, Flume! I ended up taking the little part about the magician out in later drafts, and I didn't even notice that typo, so it was lucky! ...

Thank you! I absolutely love your advice and will work on the ending; I was a little iffy about it too. Thanks so much for your great feedback and for ...

Hello! I also don't have a ton of experience with poetry, so my opinion isn't quite as seasoned as I would like it to be. I would like to say ...

This is really sweet, thank you!

Thank you man! The stanzas were actually lost in the formatting on here, wasn't sure why but I couldn't fix it.