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Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 4
Awwww. This chapter made me feel sad for Sophia. :( She needs to find a love interest, but knowing your writing she probably will find one. Philup is an interesting ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Tainted Blood Ch.1 Part 1
Huh. This could be interesting. Just try not to make it another Twilight. There are too many Twilight posers as it is. Keep it up and I'll definitely be checking ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Ch 1: Her
Hi romance otaku ! Its estead. You've been reviewing my stuff so i thought it would only be fair to read all of your stuff! :) So I'm not the ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 2
Another very good chapter. :) I'm terrible at grammar and such, so I'm not even going to bother trying to find something wrong with that. It seems as if Jabberhut ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Chapter 1
Hey! Your work is REALLY good. It does remind me of Twilight in parts, but those are just parts. The whole idea could go in a totally different direction, and ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Prologue
Wow. You're so good! Lol. I only wish i could go so in depth with the whole kissing thing. I am a Twilight lover so other vampire stories i critique ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: The Satan's -------- Chapter One
Haha. Very funny idea. I quite liked it. You should really continue this. I could see it as some tween fiction novel of some sort. There were a few spelling ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: Fighting the cliché
Hey there! I just got done reading your story and here's what i think. I actually generally liked it. I've played with the idea of normality myself some times and ...
Aug 12, 2008
