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Jack-pot! Bingo! Amen! - God, what else is it that people cry out these days? FemmeFatale: The feeling you'd just described is EXACTLY the feeling that I had hoped for. ...

WOW. Never had I expected this much response. I honestly cannot say how surprised I am at everyone's reviews. Not to mention positive comments! So first of all, thank you. ...

Thank you EscapeThat, i'm glad at least someone's understood my reasons behind this piece. That was the exact impression I initially meant to put across. No further thought; yet being ...

Gosh, you make me blush. But thank you. A hell of a lot. As pretty as it may sound, that poem was gruesome to write. Now an explanation that I ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D And thank you for pointing out the little bit of imperfection. I must admit, i really didn't notice it! Hehe. Respectfully yours, ...

Thank you for all the lovely responses! I understand if this is indeed a hard piece to review in deep, thus the short but sweet comments the majority of you ...

Woah, you are absoulutely right! I wasn't focusing on my narrative, the character's latest and most present thoughts made themselves comfortable and gradually began changing in tense. Hmph. Not all ...

The title is Italian (like the epic poem) for espresso. Just to clear that up. So i wasn't mislead after all! You were talking about a liquid, a brew! :P ...

First of all, THANK YOU for reviewing my first submission here on the forum. I'm still kinda getting used to how it all works and whatnot. But not like that's ...