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Its always a fantastic thing to read a well written story, its a talent. A talent which few have I might add. While the angst is so dense that it ...

Gorgeous words right there. I usually don't like rhyming poems, because of my own horrid prejudices, but this one was very good. I personally don't get much out of it ...

Why? I don't fully see the purpose of this piece. I understand the angst and anger and all that, but surely there are more artful ways to put it, maybe ...

this cheered me up in a way that poetry rarely does. This piece is lighthearted without being airy. Now i dont know if it was a joke, i laughed, but ...

First, arent all prayers poems, kinda. Second, check out the psalms if you want some religious poetry Third, it is impossible to really review such and atavistic poem without hurting ...

Good lord, finally some real poetry. Nothing is in this poems is too obvious but nothing is caught in atavistic obscurity or, even worse, abstract obscurity. Not much to criticize, ...

first off, jobs suck. second off, there are few grammatical errors that im not going to point out and correct because im sure some more anal member will take care ...

A solid effort but like so many poems it only tells you things, a poem loses most of its power when it tells you what to see instead of allowing ...

This was a fantastic reawakening of sylvia plath. I noticed your name and i can really see her influence in you, and when i say influenced i dont mean plagiarized. ...

Death will always strike the important matter is, is your soul saved yet? Saying is is just doesn't create any sort of cohesiveness . In a haiku you are supposed ...

Interesting, i cant bring my thoughts on the subject matter to bare except to say that you have chosen a timeless topic and did a commendable job on it. Now ...

Bah too cute for my liking. It sounds like a hallmark card. I hate to be a downer but i see nothing but adorable puppies and gum drops in this ...

Good theme, solid writing but this seemed to me to be much more like prose broken up into small poetic sounding lines. If you just put them in sentences you ...

The idea behind haikus is that you must show and not tell in 17 syllables, a daunting task and one i dont try to take on. In this poem you ...

First off i commend you for fighting off writers block, its a terrible disease that haunts far to many carpal tunnels, next off i wouldn't put somtehing into a public ...