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Re: The Wayfaring-Chapter 4 : An Unexpected Turn (Revised)
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Jul 18, 2014
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE it! It has so much description and adventure! Some things: Jason gasped, whipping around. “Gillion!” he cried, fear striking a note in his voice. The man emerged from -
Re: A Twins Hunt - A Cold Night (The Prologue I forgot about...)
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Jul 18, 2014
Dark. Amazing. What do you mean by Hunter, though? Do you mean Artemis Hunter? Because that would be awesome. Please explain. Also, I do love the detailed description in this ... -
Re: Here in the Dark
Here in the dark is where we’ll stay Here in the dark, our place to play Here in the dark is what you fear Here in the dark, for we ...
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Re: The Deeper Water, Chapter Two
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Jul 17, 2014
Terrific! I really like the sentence at the end. Favorite part: That night, she listened to her mother snoring- worn out from her latest encounter. He had been so reluctant ... -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana (9-2)
Awesome. A few things, though. One: "We're going to die!" "You have to know what to do!" "You're the Guide!" "It's timed perfectly! You're the key!" Maybe I could think ...
Jul 17, 2014
