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Re: Love; Understated
WOW! that was a great poem, The others above me have basically fixed your poem so i wont bother with editing. But WOW!
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Chapter one AGB
Ok I spaced it out some more thanks for the advice!
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Star Wars
Sadly, I agree with King. You did break the rules of the site. The basic needs for story posting are 2 reviews=1 post. Story-wise, this piece is an excellent creative ...
May 17, 2008 -
Re: New Book
Really good start I enjoyed it. But work with the characters a little more. I would like to read more.
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Poem
Very nice job kid. The thing is it did not flow all that well. just tweak it a little and it will be great.
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Monologue
Please redo you need to reformat
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Silent River
very good!
May 15, 2008 -
Re: School Trip part 2
Very good.
May 15, 2008