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Hello; this has pretty much the same symptoms as the last post; except that your character doesn't sound as much like a teenage girl here; though she does have some ...

Okay, let me say first that I really, really liked it. One typo “I’m here, mow let’s go” I said, bored. mow to now. But you know that. Some random ...

I think you've had two very nitpickish reviews; especially considering that I was glued to the screen. Heck, I even teared up. Or sobbed once. Or let tears fall freely ...

Hello there! I wasn't going to post anything at first because the number of comments is a little intimidating, but I thought what the hillbillyonahaystack. I might at well. This ...

It's pretty good so far; however I should tell you that, sometimes, very, very short posts are just as daunting as very, very, very, long ones. There's not much to ...

Wow; that was great; it was actually pretty gritty! And dark! I knew you had it in you! This is actually a lot more interesting, so far, than the back ...

It's me again. I know, stalker. I really like this poem; especially the last three lines. Your two longer lines, however, seem a little awkward. I'm talking about, of course ...

That was really good. And yes, most people do use a razor although sometimes a pen, a mechanical pencil, a brush with metal bristles or your own nails work as ...

I feel a self obligation to finish books. Because usually I've paid for them and even if I haven't; I do it out of respect of the author. You can't ...

That was really good! I read all of your other stuff and I thought you might be a Harry Potter fan. I really like your works, all of them, but ...

That was really good! I liked the language and the whimsical tone of the story. Picking the old man as the narrator was an interesting thing to do. Your writing ...

Wow. I like it a lot; I knew I was going to like Malcolm. Small, but spunky. I hope Peter doesn't play any excessively mean tricks on him. Is this ...

Beautiful! I really like it; although I might as well tell you that I like Devon and new-kid crybaby more than I like Peter. I'll use a harry potter metaphor ...

That was really fantastic. And I was right about the salem witch trials-- good job tying in the events of her death and her flawed personality. It sounded like very ...

Wow. That was really creative. I assume this is happening somewhere in new england, or at least on the east coast? With a girl who was killed during the salem ...