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Re: The Astronaut
That was absolutely beautiful. You've done a great job describing the emotions of the characters - I could feel it myself as if I was there. The way you used ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: I'm So So Sorry
Wow. I could try to say something, but as I'm not a great reviewer who notices small details, I'm not going to try to jump over my shadow. All I ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Her
This is such a sweet story, it made my heart melt! It reminded me of my first love:) I love the description of her gray eyes, such a great use ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Lost In Time
Really love how you've described the nature - the candyfloss sky, cool calm breeze, seagulls squawking - it all adds a lot of emotion to this story and creates a ...
Aug 6, 2016
