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  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: ​The Astronaut

    That was absolutely beautiful. You've done a great job describing the emotions of the characters - I could feel it myself as if I was there. The way you used ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: I'm So So Sorry

    Wow. I could try to say something, but as I'm not a great reviewer who notices small details, I'm not going to try to jump over my shadow. All I ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Her

    This is such a sweet story, it made my heart melt! It reminded me of my first love:) I love the description of her gray eyes, such a great use ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Lost In Time

    Really love how you've described the nature - the candyfloss sky, cool calm breeze, seagulls squawking - it all adds a lot of emotion to this story and creates a ...

    Aug 6, 2016


I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction.
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