emmylove

Hey there :) So... the others basically got all the grammar and spelling stuff, so I'll just make comments on content and stuff. The first paragraph is okay as it ...

Hello :) I'm here to nitpick and stuff. Spelling/grammar corrections in orange. First off, a tip for posting to YWS: try to seperate all your paragraphs with spaces in between. ...

Hey :) I apologize for the delay, but I promised you a review, so here it is! I’m not the biggest dragon out there, I’ll admit, but I do have ...

Hey there :) I have some nitpicks in the spoiler, if you'd like to read them. I didn't bother with punctuation errors. "So what are we hunting brother?” An angelic ...

Hello :) Emmylove here and ready to review. I didn't feel like being too nitpicky, so there won't be many. First off, you title this as Chapter 1, so I ...

Hello there :) By request, here is your review, complete with nitpicks and such. Anna Trueman sat awkwardly beside me outside Room 239, quietly sobbing. I'm not a huge fan ...

Hello, it's me... by request :) Other than in your spoiler, I caught no spelling errors and only one grammar error. They varied in shape, some were skinny and lanky ...

'Eyyyyyyy, it's me :) Sorry it's a bit long, I'm feeling rather nitpicky. I'm ashamed to say that I'm not familiar with the story of the Wizard of Oz (never ...

I actually have quite a few nitpicks, but overall this is quite good. Sorry it's so long, I'll change the colors to make it interesting. ~I liked how in the ...

Hey :) I'm back! Nitpicks: The first sentence is really good, except for the word "nervously." It's a label word, so maybe you should try to "show, don't tell." I'm ...

SQUEEEEEE!! Oh gosh. I love Harvest Moon. And MFoMT was my favorite :D I don't have many nitpicks, except twice you spelled Kai's name like "Kia." That's a car brand, ...

Since it's so short, I think I'll quote the whole thing and do corrections in green. Try not to be intimidated, I'm pretty wordy. They always said that they would ...

This was absolutely magical. I might come back and read it again in a couple hours so I can start off the new year with a smile and some witty ...

I absolutely love this! :D But one nitpick: I do know of another website that does this, but it's based in the USA rather than in Europe. I used to ...

Haha, I love Harry Potter ♥ I think I'll do this one in purple. So, first I have to say, her name is Lilly Evan s , so you can't ...