emmaannaolivia

Thank you for reading and thank you for your kind words! :) Yes I'm aware and I thought about just putting a random name in as well, but like the ...

Haha, thank you! :) Yes well, the blow to the head kills her that day but I chose to leave the dying part out because I felt like it might ...

Oh no, i'm not offended. Like i said, I appreciate it! I do want to become a better writer, or I wouldn't have signed up for YWS. :)

First: thank you for all of the tips! I really appreciate it. Secondly: English is not my native language, so for all of the literary or grammar errors, my mistake. ...

Thank you so much! Yes, the whole idea of Umbra was to confuse the reader, hehe. Thanks again and I will! :)

Oh, you actually found the depth that I wanted to achieve: how the intrigue is actually between my main and "Umbra" and not the boy, even though the reader is ...

Thank you so much! Yes, well I warned you. ;) This is actually a part of a story, but alas, I couldn't find the words so I made it a ...

Wow, thank you! I am, of course, aware of how vague this is because it really is a short, and I wanted it that way so that the reader can ...