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Thank you. Your suggestion will help me improve the opening. If you're interested, I have the full chapter on this site. It's to the right beneath "related items" and it's ...

Thank you so much because your advice was actually excellent, exactly what I needed. I am working on improving the tiny details in my writing right now :)

If you look to the right beneath "related items" I have the rest of the chapter. It's called "Undecided Title:)"

Not offended at all because this is not actually a poem, it is indeed a rant and a blog post! I just wanted to post it on this site and ...

Thank you for your thorough review! I promise to take your suggestions into consideration as I edit. This is actually the second chapter of my novel (the first chapter is ...

Thank you for your encouragement! It is much appreciated!

You are a poetic genius!

Okay, well thank you for answering all of my questions!

I will try my best! It might take an eternity, but I have adopted this book and I like the story of Joseph ^_^

Wow, I have never seen this many like on anything on this site! Great job :D It was really motivating too! Can this be our theme poem?? XD

I wrote it for a friend and I originally killed the Man off, but I decided to let him live. I rushed the ending a little too much because I ...

Hello, thank you for the review and sorry for the confusion. The Man was also referred to as "he" and his wife was Molly and his daughter was Claire.

I adopted your novel :3 But I'm not sure if I want to go back and review all the chapters...I am looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the review. Do you have any suggestion on how to improve the ending of the chapter? I already have twelve chapters, so the plot is planned out, ...

Sorry about the lack of spaces. When I copied the manuscript on this site I had to go back and manually put spaces between every sentence, so, understandably, I missed ...