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This poem was very entertaining to read. And personally I was just going to say that it may read easier if you said: Cause you disturb my abyss of sleep. ...

Oh my god! This was so captivating for a poem on the shorter side. I like the lines: "One step from heaven-- One step from hell" I really enjoyed the ...

I loved this poem. My favorite thing was the last part; 'go seek me in the darkness' it's said as a command, and I liked that it made it sound ...

Hello! I really like the story line so far, it's realistic. The main character sounds oblivious to her actions, that are causing the others in her life stress. Maybe you ...