emilybrodo

Ok, I'll start to put up the whole book, I'm just a bit worried about the first chapter being boring. But thank you for all the advice!!

Yeah the girl is possessed. Poor girl ha ha

It's funny how this got so many views because of the message 'please don't read' I may just use that from now on. 'strokes chin thoughtfully.' XD XD XD

Thank you guys, these comments are amazing! I'll be sure to fix anything that brings my story down, and I have posted a bit more of my book if you'd ...

This is kind of creepy after reading the spoiler, the fact that it makes sense to the child to harm itself, but to others it's a crazy action. I love ...

I can understand how I got the punctuation wrong, thank you for helping me with that guys. But i'm wondering, do I keep the full stops? Or do i delete ...

Thankyou for the feed back, i don't write many peoms, i shall fix these mistakes although some i don't understand why they're wrong, for example: 'Yet continue i must'. It's ...