emilyb

The creature is meant to be seen in the way that the reader sees the creature. For one reader, it might be a Giant Elmo (I don't know why it ...

Thanks, that makes a lot more sense about the mafia thing. I think I might use the playing the piano in an angry way because that makes more sense too. ...

Thanks, I will fix those first two things. To answer your questions: Their family is very, very rich, and she assumed that his bet was just about money, so it ...

Wow. I have to say, this was very interesting to read. I liked it a lot. Keep writing. I also have to agree with the first poster, the first paragraph ...

I actually disagree, I thought this was a great piece. It was very interesting to read, and I quite liked the going back in time thing. What grade did you ...