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Re: Porter's Pineapple Upside-Down Cake
That was a really great story! Your descriptions and emotions were very well written. I can't wait for the next part of the story, well done.
Sep 8, 2012 -
Re: Perfect
Your descriptions are very well written. This story just radiates happiness but it might be a little too perfect? I mean the story is good but maybe it could use ...
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: Don't Forget To Remember Me
This was very interesting! I enjoyed reading this. Very well written description.
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: Horror
Your description of the monster was very realistic and interesting. You should probably add where and how Kyra found the monster so this story could be less confusing. The sentences ...
Aug 26, 2012