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hello! thanks for reviewing! the switch of perspective was a bit confusing, i see that, it's sort of like changing from the narrator's perspective to somebody outside i guess? sorry ...

hello! thanks so much for commenting! i see what you mean about it being confusing, and yes, this is my imagination!

This is so good! I love all the wording, it reminds me of Anne of Green Gables! I like how much you use "lass" haha. Its also so sad..